Peer+Review+Assignment

Today you will be doing a peer review assignment in addition to finishing up your three paragraphs. You need to pick someone else on your team and read what they've written so far. You need to make three substantive (this means well-written, academic) comments to help improve their writing. You should start your sentence in any of the following ways:

1) I liked what you wrote here because [fill in the blank] 2) I think you could improve this sentence by [fill in the blank] 3) You are missing a [fill in the blank]. You could tell them they are missing a concrete detail or a commentary or a main idea and explain to them how to fix it.

You will not be penalized if your teammate does not have enough written for you to give three comments.